1 你的外套破了。

Incorrect：

Your coat is broken.

correct：

Your coat is torn.

2 总之苏珊没有犯错。

Incorrect：

Susan didn’t make a faultanyway.

correct：

Susan didn’t make a mistakeanyway.

3 能借用一下你的电话吗？

Incorrect：

May l borrowyour phone？

correct：

May l use your phone？

4 外面天还亮着。

Incorrect：

lt was still brightoutside.

correct：

lt was still light outside.

5 我把帽子忘在屋里了。

Incorrect：

l forget my hat in the house.

correct：

l left my hat in the house.

6 我去医院探望了她生病的母亲。

Incorrect：

l visited her ill mother in the hospital.

correct：

l visited her sick mother in the hospital.

7 他失去意识已经很长时间了。

Incorrect：

He lost consciousness for a long time.

correct：

He was uncoscious for a long time.

8 她婚姻幸福。

Incorrect：

His marriage was happy.

correct：

He married life was happy.

9 今年夏天我要去自己的出生地看看，这是10年来的第一次。

Incorrect：

l’ll visit my native place for the first time in ten years this sunmmer.

correct：

l’ll visit my birth place for the first time in ten years this sunmmer.

10 我看他很面熟。

Incorrect：

l know his face.

correct：

l know him by sight.

11 你就是在这点上弄错了。

Incorrect：

This is where you mistake.

correct：

This is where you are mistaken.

12 劳拉用了半天时间复习功课。

Incorrect：

Laura has spent half a day to revise her lessons.

correct：

Laura has spent a half day revising her lessons.

13 我有很多活要干。

Incorrect：

l have a lot of work to be done.

correct：

l have a lot of work to do.

14 不要对我抱太多希望。

Incorrect：

Don’t expect me too much.

correct：

Don’t expect too much from（of）me.

15 他待我十分友好。

Incorrect：

He treated me very friendly.

correct：

He treated me in a friendly way.

16 和我不一样，她对英语很精通。

Incorrect：

Different from me，she is proficient in English.

correct：

Unlike me，she is proficient in English.

17 他们不理解我的想法。

Incorrect：

They didn’t understand my mind.

correct：

They didn't understand what l was thinking.

18 我就是这样做的。

Incorrect：

This is the way how l did it.

correct：

This ishow l did it./This is the way l did it.

19 给我点钱吧，如果你有的话。

Incorrect：

Give my money，if you have.

correct：

Give my money，if you have any.

20 昨天早上在费尔大街上，她偶遇了她的男朋友。

Incorrect：

She ran into her boyfriend yesterday morning in Fair Avenue.

correct：

She ran into her boyfriend in Fair Avenue yesterday morning.